Thursday, September 24, 2020
Book Review: Stories that Bind Us by Susie Finkbeiner
Thursday, September 10, 2020
Book Review: Finding Hope by Katlyn Grace
Hope Lawson’s bakery has been a haven to Ethan Grey’s troubled soul ever since that horrible accident when Ethan lost everything. He lost his family, his faith, and his dignity. Now, he’s turned to alcohol to fill his voids, but is it really working? Problems seem more out of hand, and depression is slowly seeping in holes where there used to be joy. Hope’s compassion runs deep for the alcoholic whose lifeless eyes could use a sparkle of hope. When she steps out in faith to help Ethan, Ethan’s faced with the struggle of his intimidating past. Everything in him begs a second chance for a better life, but is it worth it? Is it worth giving up the alcohol that beckons him every waking second? Is it worth opening up about his past?Will Ethan begin to realize that he needs Someone better than himself to save him? Will Hope be able to help remove the blinders from Ethan’s eyes, so he can truly see his life for what it could be? And will it spark more than a friendly, Christ-like gesture between the two of them?
Series: The Lawson Series, #1
My rating:
*sigh* I really, really tried to like this book.
But, obviously, I didn't.
It was incredibly hard to get into this book. It took me literally weeks to get through it. I'd pick it up, read a few pages, and put it down for a few days.
The amount of pages overwhelmed me when I realized I had that many to get through before I was finished. But I pushed through, hoping that maybe it'll get better. Maybe the finale will be fantastic and breathtaking.
Aaaaaand it's taken me over a month to talk myself into writing this review.
So, what didn't I like? *cries*
-The writing style was kinda amateurish, I could definitely tell that it was a debut novel. There was a lot of telling and less showing, and some of the scenes dragged on because of this. I'd just start to get sucked into a scene when the writing style would suddenly jerk and pull me out of it again.
-The romance. I knew that it was going to be a romance. But the COVER *heart eyes* is so adorable and from all I'd heard about it, the romance was super sweet. So I decided to give it a go. *deep breath* I...shouldn't have, honestly. This is the main thing I disliked. The first page of the book (please FORGIVE ME if I give out spoilers) has our heroine eyeing the town drunk, thinking how good-looking he is and that she'd consider marrying him...if he weren't a drunk. And our couple is constantly thinking about each other. Okay, fine, two people attracted to each other are gonna think about each other, I'll give you that. But when they insist upon just 'being friends' yet show up for each other when they're sick with soup and stay to watch a movie with them?? Not to mention forehead kissing and hair stroking when they're?? Just?? Friends?? *headesk* Oh, and let's not forget their first 'real' kiss! (they kissed once before but felt horrible about it and kept denying their feelings bc there's too many things between them...but they kissed anyway...like...no thx) Cute date, I suppose...but then a kiss and she's giggling and telling him how he tastes?? So he reciprocates?? *cough* sorry. Rant over. I'll move on.
-The plot was good enough, but cliche. Dude hits tragedy and becomes the town drunk. Finds sanctuary and stability in his daily trips to a bakery. Falls in love with the cute, sweet baker. She shows him what faith in action looks like. He has a rough journey but hopes to make it to where she is. Not bad, just...kinda meh.
So what did I like?? (yes, there actually were a couple of things that I liked...surprised?)
-The characters were pretty good! I wouldn't say there's anything extra special about them...but they were still enjoyable. (Bri's character got on my nerves several times, but overall, she was a fun character) Mark was my favorite, though!
-The message was so good. Miss Grace brought out several excellent points and didn't shy away from the tough questions. I so appreciated this! She even gave me goosebumps a couple of times. ;)
So, yes, to say that my ride with this book was a rollercoaster would be an understatement...but I do believe that it's going to really touch someone someday! I...just am not that person.
*I received an e-copy of this book from the author for promotional purposes. All thoughts are my own.
Tuesday, September 8, 2020
Bookish News
NOPE, I'M NOT PUBLISHING AGAIN.
(Yet, anyway.)
Just had to get that idea out of your heads at the beginning, hehe!
But what is this bookish news I speak of, you ask?
Good question!
Well.
If you may remember, a year ago (come Thursday, that is) Faith Potts and I each published a book on World Suicide Prevention Day. Our books have been out in the wild for an entire year. #mindblown
September is suicide prevention month. This is what prompted Faith and I to launch our books, Freedom and Beloved when we did. Because every single life matters. Because no matter what you may think, there is light at the end of this tunnel, even if you can't see it.
You are not alone.
You are loved. So, so much.
So, to commemorate the anniversary of these stories, Faith and I are hosting an Instagram challenge! #MyReasontoLive2020 is all about spreading life and hope, and if you're on Insta, come join!! (have I mentioned that there's a giveaway??)
In other news, Beloved is is ON SALE on Kindle right now for just $0.99 through Friday! Go snag your copy now!
Come join our challenge and spread hope!
Thursday, July 30, 2020
Book Review: The Grim Alliance by Angela R. Watts
The Second Civil War storms through the crippled US and winter brings nothing but disaster. West Johnston has earned his mafia father’s trust while searching for hidden answers: why are the UN leaders being assassinated, and why can’t the killers be found? If West can’t stop the Union from attacking D.C. in their last attempt to win the war, how can he stop his father?
Springtown remains one of the few townships left standing amid the tyrannical rule. Another group of gangsters prepare the town for winter. Rene’ Fisher is torn between fearing for her boyfriend Simon’s life and the upheaval taking place in Springtown. Can her father keep the town at peace? Will God have mercy on the allegiance the town must form with an unlikely candidate in order to survive, or will Rene’s home burn like the rest of the world?
Told in multiple bold, abrasive narratives, THE GRIM ALLIANCE steps into a war-ridden nation where bleeding for what you believe is the only option for those determined to win. But with faith, can even the bloodiest hands be made clean?
Angela R. Watts is a YA fiction author who strives to glorify the Lord in all she does. She’s a homeschool graduate living at Step By Step Sanctuary, Tennessee, though with Gypsy and Norwegian in her blood, she tends to travel. She’s been writing stories since she was little, but also enjoys chores, painting, and watching sunsets.
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Monday, July 27, 2020
Throwback Tuesday #2: Tucker's Revenge, Part 2
“Wake up, sleepyhead! We’re leaving for the train station in a few hours; are you packed and ready to go?”
Jamie rolled over and groaned. “Go away, Reuben.” Suddenly she sat up. “Wait, we’re going to Cheyenne today!” She jumped out of bed, then froze. “But... Levi and I were going to have another race today! Do we have to leave?”
Reuben raised an eyebrow. “Beth and Lewis are expecting us, Jamie. We’ve been planning this for a long time.”
Jamie sighed. “All right, I’ll get packed. But...” she brightened. “I know! We can take Thunder and Buck with us on the train and-”
Reuben held up his hand. “Jamie, we’re not going to take the horses. We’ll be back in a week or so, and you can have your race then.”
Jamie sighed. “All right, Reuben.” She pointed to a trunk in the corner of the room. “Would you please carry my suitcase downstairs?”
******
Jamie’s eyes stared out the train window with boredom at the countryside swiftly moving by. “I wish Mother could have come with us,” she said with a sigh.
Rewrite: Jamie stared out the window with a dismal sigh. The forgotten trip to Cheyenne was now forcing her to sit in this stuffy rail car instead of out in the pasture having a rematch with Levi, and the more she thought about it, the more frustrated she became. She opened her mouth to voice her complaints, but one look at her oldest brother's face told her that he wasn't as compassionate as their mother. "I wish Mother could've come with us," she whispered.
Reuben smiled. “Yes, I do too,” he replied, “but we couldn’t wait any longer for this trip, and Mother would rather be at home in bed than traveling on a train while she wasn’t feeling good. And she wouldn’t want her absence to spoil our trip, either; she’ll come visit Beth and Lewis sometime soon.”
Rewrite: Reuben smiled, having heard the remark. "I do too, but we couldn't wait any longer for this trip." He patted her knee and leaned his head back to rest on the top of the seat. "Besides, you and I both know she much prefers resting in bed than rocking on a train while she's not feeling well." He chuckled. "I wouldn't put it past her to stay home now just so that she can come visit Beth and Lewis when she can have them and the kids all to herself."
“I’d rather be at home with her anyway,” Jamie muttered to herself. “Now I have to travel with my brothers to a big city and sit in a stuffy room drinking tea.”
Levi shrank back in mock horror. “Well, I’m sorry we’re not good enough company for you, Miss Abbott. But I assure you, you will find no other men as dashing, handsome, and gentlemanly as the Abbott Brothers!”
Jamie rolled her eyes and giggled. Then, noticing that her second brother hadn’t said anything, said, “Simeon, what’s wrong?”
Rewrite: "I'd rather be home with her," Jamie muttered. "But do I get to? No, I have to travel with my brothers to a big city and sit in a stuffy room drinking tea and acting all prim and proper."
"Well, excuse me, Miss Abbott." Levi shrank back in mock horror. "I'm sorry that we're not good enough company for you. But," he smirked, "At least we don't make you be as ladylike as Mother does. That's good for
something, right?"
Jamie tilted her head. "Maybe."
Simeon looked up from where he was sitting with his chin in his hand, his brow furrowed with thought.
“I’m not sure. It’s just that... well, I’ve got a feeling about this trip. And it’s not a good one. I don’t know; I just have a feeling that something bad is going to happen.”
A tingle went down Jamie’s spine. It was certainly not like Simeon to be unsure of himself-- or anything, for that matter.
DELETEDELETEDELETEDELETE (seriously. Premonitions are, in my opinion, rarely good things to put in your book unless you can pull them off right. I'd just add some more dialogue, and definitely some more description about the landscape)(and for sure add stuff with Simeon since without this bit you wouldn't know he's traveling with them)
Finally they arrived in Cheyenne. Disembarking, Jamie saw a mercantile across the street, which gave her an idea. She grasped Reuben’s arm. “Reuben, may I go to the mercantile and buy Mother some peppermints? You know how she loves them.”
Reuben smiled and nodded. “Yes, you may buy Mother some peppermints, but first I’d like to go visit a friend that lives a couple of houses down the street from here.”
“I’ll take her,” Simeon spoke up. He turned to Levi. “You go wherever you want; we’ll meet you at Tucker’s Mercantile in an hour.”
******
As Jamie stepped into the Tucker’s Mercantile later that afternoon, she smelled something unpleasant.
“Simeon, what’s that-” she was interrupted by a loud cry.
“No! Please don’t hurt me! I-I’ll work hard to pay for it; honest, I will!”
“You’ll pay for it, alright!” A gruff voice replied. “And after you pay for it, I guarantee you won’t even think of tipping over another sardine barrel!”
Rewrite: (no clue why it says 'later that afternoon')(also sardines were never stored in barrels right??)(so I'm gonna change the context a bit)
As Jamie stepped inside Tucker's Mercantile, she was greeted with racks upon racks of everything that she loved about mercantiles—and the shattering of glass as something hit the floor further back in the room.
A cry rang out. "No—please, don't hurt me! I'll work hard to pay for it; you know I will, Mr. Tucker!"
"You'll pay for it, all right." A gruff voice grated on Jamie's ears like dragging fingernails across a chalkboard. "And after you pay for it, you won't even think of breaking another vase again. Do you have any idea how much those things cost?"
“Simeon, we’ve got to stop him!” Jamie cried as the sound of slapping commenced. And, without waiting for a reply, she rushed off to find the source of the sound.
Near the back of the store, Jamie found the store’s clerk whipping a boy about her age with a belt.
Rewrite: Jamie winced as the all-too-familiar sound of leather upon flesh ensued. Her brothers had felt the wrath of the belt often enough that she knew the sound by heart. The image of Levi, face red and swollen with crying after a thrashing, flashed through her mind, and she winced. A twinge of compassion pushed her into action. "Simeon, we've got to stop him!"
"Jamie, don't—"
But she was already rushing to find the source of the sound. Near the back of the store, Jamie found whom she assumed to be the store's clerk whipping a boy who couldn't be any older than herself.
“No, stop! Stop!” She cried, yanking on the man’s raised arm.
“Why, you little... it was none of your business! I’m going to-” he turned in fury and raised his hand when he suddenly stopped, hand in mid-air, when Simeon stepped behind Jamie.
"Stop!" She shouted, grasping the man's raised arm and jerking It backward.
He howled in pain as his shoulder popped, and he turned toward her, eyes flashing. "Why, you little—" he grabbed her upper arm in a meaty fist with a grip strong enough that she was certain that she'd have a bruise. "You're going to regret that, missy." He raised the hand holding the belt high, but stopped in mid-air. Jamie heard a heavy footstep behind her and didn't have to look to know that Simeon had come to her rescue.
I hope that was as entertaining for you as it was for me! *hides* just wait until you read next month's...
Tuesday, July 21, 2020
2020 Indie Releases
Thursday, July 16, 2020
Book Review: A Strand of Hope by Amanda Tero
But she survived. Through stories. Because books didn’t judge. Books weren’t angry she was alive. Books never expected her to be anything but who she was.
As she grows up, her beloved library becomes her true home.
So when the library is designated part of President Roosevelt’s Packhorse Library Project, Lena is determined to get the job of bringing books to highlanders, believing she’ll finally be free of her mom forever.
But earning the trust of highlanders is harder than she imagined, and her passion for books might not be enough to free her from her chains.





























